1.Only have one idea in each paragraph. Open with RBG’s death and then explain that she authored the ground-breaking decision, and then explain the decision.2.Write out Amendments. Ex. “Fourteenth Amendment,” not “14th.”3.Insert bottom center page numbers.4.This doesn’t make sense – why did the Fourth Circuit overturn the District Court’s decision?5.Word choice is “off.”6.She is not of the court of appeals.7.This section is confusing because it isn’t clear if the decision or the parties’ arguments are being discussed.8.This is redundant in places so go back through and reorganize. 9.??10.Taiwan information needs to be developed more.